The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the informahtion by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart compares key information about salaries between five employment areas namely police, nurse, teacher, firefighter, and underground driver, in the UK.
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also
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hours
per week among the sectors.
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Overall
, the underground driver gets the highest salary Linking Words
whereas
the nurse receives the lowest payment compared to the other types. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the academic staff and firefighters have long Linking Words
hours
doing their job Use synonyms
while
the underground drivers only have a minimum time for their job.
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To begin
with, the police with average shifts of 40 weekly, acquired income of around € 20,000 Linking Words
although
they have already done full-time jobs for more than three years. Linking Words
Then
, a nurse is paid a minimum payment than other professionals, they only obtain money of around €10,000 with 38 full-time jobs.
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On the other hand
, teachers and fire officers have a similar duty time of 55 Linking Words
hours
but they have different payments. Use synonyms
While
the fire marshal gets an income of € 40 thousand, the lecturer only obtains € 35,000. Linking Words
Lastly
, even though the underground driver experienced the short-time pressure duty with only 35 Linking Words
hours
each week, Use synonyms
this
career received the most competitive pay with € 50K.Linking Words
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