The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the proportions of males and females aged 60-64 in
employment
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in four different
nations
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in the years 1970 and 2000.
Overall
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, the
employment
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rate of
men
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decreased in all countries
while
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women
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's rates increased in some
nations
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. Japan was the highest in
employment
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for both
men
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and
women
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. The
employment
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percentages of
women
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were lower than
men
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. The
employment
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rates of
men
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in Australia went down from 74% in 1970 to 47% in 2000
whereas
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women
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went up from 17% in 1970 to 19% in 2000.
men
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employers in Japan were the highest among all
nations
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with 84% in 1970 and declined to 76% in 2000. Girls
employment
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in Japan was the highest with 43% and dropped slightly to 40% in 2000. The proportion of employed males in the USA was the lowest among all
nations
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with nearly three quarters and it went down to just above half in 2000
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the rate of employed females in the USA was the second highest with 36% in 1970 and rose to 38% in 2000. The
men
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employers in Belgium were the second highest with 79% before its dramatic drop to just 19% in 2000.
Women
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who work in Belgium were the lowest among all
nations
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with small fractions of 8% and 7% in 1970 and 2000 respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words employment, nations, men, women with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went down" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Employment rate
  • Percentage
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Gender disparity
  • Trend
  • Decline
  • Improvement
  • Variation
  • Noteworthy
  • Aligned
  • Comparative analysis
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