The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of the population from 2002 to 2010, and describe owning

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education

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for the years 2002 and 2010.

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year by year until the end of

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2002

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50, increased slowly and

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no graduate diploma about 15, significantly increased from high school

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roughly 35 and

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college school, bachelor's degree and close by postgraduate become the highest total

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at 70 in 2002.

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and narrow growth to postgraduate and

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the highest amount approximately 90

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words computer, ownership, level, education with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

193 words

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growing reliance on technology
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