The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show local government expenditure in 2010 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The presented pie charts compare data about the percentage of local authority's investment in 9 various factors at 2 points in time namely 2010 and 2015.
Overall
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, it was important that the sections of all items other than welfare and interest on borrowing decreased over the period of 5 years.
According to
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the graphs, Education, the main element that hit the highest proportion at both times, formed just under a quarter in 2010;
then
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it was 3% reduced in 2015, from the prior time. Health care made up 21% in 2010;
then
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it declined to one-fifth in 2015. Pension constituted the same portion in both years at 19%. Defence fell from 17% in 2010 to 14% in 2015. The diagrams demonstrate that welfare and interest on borrowing were
in contrast
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to all factors owing to the fact that they respectively composed 8% and 5% in the beginning.
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, they rose to 13 and 10 per cent.
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, at the start, Transportation and culture & leisure reported 3% and 2% after that, they made up 1% the same as the Others fraction at both times.
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