The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and
amount
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the amount
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of time spent doing
housework
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in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
According to
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the first chart, we can
know
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see
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the
percentage
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of households with
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a refigerator
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refigerator
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refrigerator
was 0% in 1920
then
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it increased fast
in
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to
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90% in1960,
then
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increased to 100% in 1980. After 1980,
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then
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the
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percentage
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remain unchanged. The
percentage
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of vacuum
cleaner
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cleaners
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was 30% in 1920, it was retentive growth to 100% in 2000,
then
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the
percentage
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kept stable.The
percentage
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of washing
machine
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machines
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was
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first increased and
then
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decreased,
it was
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apply
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beginning at 40%, at the top of 70%,
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and at
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the bottom
of
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at
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62%.
Then
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it increased to 74% in 2019. In the second chart, we can find the message about
number
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of
housework
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every week in each household. The
number
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of doing
housework
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about
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was about
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50 hours every week in 1920.
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the
number
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keep
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apply
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decreased to 20 in 1960,
then
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the
number
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was
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apply
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basically
remain
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remained
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unchanged between 1960 to 2000. The
number
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was at the bottom of 10 hours in 2019. In conclusion, we can see the
percentage
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of households with electrical appliances
was
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apply
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increased,
the
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and the
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percentage
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of
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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increased
fastest
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the fastest
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.
However
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, People are less and less interested in doing
housework
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, and the
number
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of times they do
housework
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per week is decreasing.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words housework, percentage, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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