The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and
amount
of time spent doing Correct article usage
the amount
housework
in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
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the first chart, we can Linking Words
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percentage
of households with Use synonyms
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a refigerator
refigerator
was 0% in 1920 Correct your spelling
refrigerator
then
it increased fast Linking Words
in
90% in1960, Change preposition
to
then
increased to 100% in 1980. After 1980, Linking Words
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then
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the
percentage
remain unchanged. The Use synonyms
percentage
of vacuum Use synonyms
cleaner
was 30% in 1920, it was retentive growth to 100% in 2000, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
then
the Linking Words
percentage
kept stable.The Use synonyms
percentage
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machine
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machines
was
first increased and Unnecessary verb
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beginning at 40%, at the top of 70%, Verb problem
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the bottom Correct word choice
and at
of
62%. Change preposition
at
Then
it increased to 74% in 2019.
In the second chart, we can find the message about Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
housework
every week in each household. The Use synonyms
number
of doing Use synonyms
housework
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about
50 hours every week in 1920. Add a missing verb
was about
Then
the Linking Words
number
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keep
decreased to 20 in 1960, Verb problem
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then
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number
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was
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remain
unchanged between 1960 to 2000. The Wrong verb form
remained
number
was at the bottom of 10 hours in 2019.
In conclusion, we can see the Use synonyms
percentage
of households with electrical appliances Use synonyms
was
increased, Unnecessary verb
apply
the
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and the
percentage
of Use synonyms
refrigerator
increased Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
fastest
. Correct article usage
the fastest
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housework
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number
of times they do Use synonyms
housework
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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