The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates
that
how to recycle Correct word choice
apply
plastic
. There are nine steps in one recovery process from recycling the Use synonyms
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
to Use synonyms
make
Wrong verb form
making
producing
and produce.
Replace the word
produce
Firstly
, people put the Linking Words
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
in a particular bin, Use synonyms
then
the recycling car Linking Words
collect
the Change the verb form
collects
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
together and Use synonyms
sent
them to the factory. People who work in the factory sort the Wrong verb form
sends
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
to choose the fit Use synonyms
bottles
. After that the Use synonyms
bottles
are Use synonyms
compresses
into blocks, Wrong verb form
compressed
Linking Words
then
they are crushed with a big gear to get the Correct word choice
and then
plastic
chippings, meanwhile, the chippings are washed in a big watering box. Use synonyms
Next,
the chippings Linking Words
are producing
Wrong verb form
produce
plastic
Use synonyms
pollets
Correct your spelling
pellets
pallets
to
in a special machine. Change preposition
apply
Then
the pellets Linking Words
are heat
from raw material, Upon being Change the verb form
are heated
heat
, the pellets are made of raw material. Wrong verb form
heated
This
raw material is used to produce products like bags, pencils, Linking Words
bottles
, Use synonyms
and
boxes and so on. These products made from recycled Correct word choice
apply
plastic
may be discarded in the future and go through the same recycling process.
In conclusion, through these describe we can see the process for recycling Use synonyms
plastic
Use synonyms
bottles
clearlyUse synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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