The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates
that
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how to recycle
plastic
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. There are nine steps in one recovery process from recycling the
plastic
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bottles
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to
make
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producing
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and produce.
Firstly
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, people put the
plastic
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bottles
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in a particular bin,
then
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the recycling car
collect
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the
plastic
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bottles
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together and
sent
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them to the factory. People who work in the factory sort the
plastic
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bottles
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to choose the fit
bottles
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. After that the
bottles
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are
compresses
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into blocks,
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then
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they are crushed with a big gear to get the
plastic
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chippings, meanwhile, the chippings are washed in a big watering box.
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the chippings
are producing
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plastic
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pollets
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pellets
pallets
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in a special machine.
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the pellets
are heat
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from raw material, Upon being
heat
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, the pellets are made of raw material.
This
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raw material is used to produce products like bags, pencils,
bottles
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,
and
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boxes and so on. These products made from recycled
plastic
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may be discarded in the future and go through the same recycling process. In conclusion, through these describe we can see the process for recycling
plastic
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bottles
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clearly
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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