The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedon, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above illustrates data on the average carbon dioxide emissions by each person in five different countries between the years 1967 and 2007.
Overall
, the graph shows a rising trend in Italy and Portugal, Linking Words
while
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on the
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contrary
it declined in Sweden and the United Kingdom.
In the case of the growth, Portugal started with below 2 carbon dioxide emissions in metric tonnesAdd a comma
contrary,
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and ended at a little below 6 in 2007. Remove the comma
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Whereas
, in Italy, the lowest one was in 1967 at 4 and closed at approximately 8 metric tonnes in 2007.
On the other side, Sweden went through a small increase after beginning at above 8 in 1967, followed by a medium decrease from 10 to below 6 from 1997 to 2007. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the United Kingdom held the same trend, starting at 11 in 1967 to below 6 in 2007.Linking Words
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