The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the rowin features, and make comparisons where relevant. Gia Linh
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of British who connected to the
Internet
at four locations, home, work, college, and library between 1998 and 2004.
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Overall
, the number of British logged into the Linking Words
Internet
at home increased slightly in the given period Use synonyms
while
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this
proportion at work experienced a contrasting movement and became the circumstance with the fewest UK people Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
who used
used
the Correct pronoun usage
who used
Internet
in 2004.
In 1998, over 50% of UK individuals accessed the Use synonyms
Internet
from home, making it the most frequently used location. Use synonyms
This
proportion rose steadily over the years, reaching just over 55% in 2004. Linking Words
Conversely
, Linking Words
Internet
access at work started at around 30% in 1998 and experienced a gradual decline, falling to roughly 10% by the end of the period.
Accessing the Use synonyms
Internet
at colleges remained relatively stable, fluctuating between 20% and around 29%. Library Use synonyms
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users
user
, which Fix the agreement mistake
users
the
least popular context, increased slightly over the years, starting at around 10% in 1998 and peaking at just under 15% in 2004Add a missing verb
is the
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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