The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the rowin features, and make comparisons where relevant. Gia Linh

The chart below shows the places in which UK people gained access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the rowin features, and make comparisons where relevant. Gia Linh
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of British who connected to the
Internet
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at four locations, home, work, college, and library between 1998 and 2004.
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, the number of British logged into the
Internet
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at home increased slightly in the given period
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this
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proportion at work experienced a contrasting movement and became the circumstance with the fewest UK people
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used
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the
Internet
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in 2004. In 1998, over 50% of UK individuals accessed the
Internet
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from home, making it the most frequently used location.
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proportion rose steadily over the years, reaching just over 55% in 2004.
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,
Internet
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access at work started at around 30% in 1998 and experienced a gradual decline, falling to roughly 10% by the end of the period. Accessing the
Internet
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at colleges remained relatively stable, fluctuating between 20% and around 29%. Library
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user
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, which
the
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least popular context, increased slightly over the years, starting at around 10% in 1998 and peaking at just under 15% in 2004
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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