The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2022, with predictions for 2030 and 2040

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in different countries from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for the future between 2030 and 2040.

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, through the given period all

countries

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population

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increased. In 1970,

Malaysia

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people

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were 30% and there was a steady increase to around 45%

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to reach just over 80% in 2040.

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Philippines

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people

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number fluctuated until 2010 with just over 40%. There was a slight rise and

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to be 50%

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people

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lives in 2040. Thailand and

Indonesia

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population

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increased slowly

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1970 to 2000 with around 29% of

people

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Indonesia

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Indonesian

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citizens

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to reach around 55% in 2040

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Thailand

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population

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stayed stable until 2020

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up in 2040

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over 44%.