The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first table above provides the number of people's reasons for giving up smoking and the amount of cigarettes they smoke each day.
Whereas
, the second table illustrates their plan to quit.
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Overall
, those who smoke are most likely to quit smoking motivated by generally better health. The percentages are declining with the increased amounts of cigarettes smoked per day. Linking Words
Furthermore
, people who intend to quit smoking within the next month remain the lowest number.
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To begin
with, individuals smoking more than 20 cigarettes per day are those with the lowest percentages. Most of them intend to quit smoking Linking Words
due to
their health in general at 64 per Linking Words
cent
, financial considerations at 31 per Use synonyms
cent
, and concerns about less risk of diseases related to smoking at 27 per Use synonyms
cent
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However
, smokers are unlikely to stop smoking Linking Words
due to
present health problems. The same goes for family pressure which holds the second lowest amount at 16 per Linking Words
cent
.
In terms of their timeframe, their possibility of giving up smoking within the next month is very low at 12 per Use synonyms
cent
. Most of them chose to quit within the next 6 months, making it the highest number at 35 per Use synonyms
cent
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Nevertheless
, there is a 29 per Linking Words
cent
of people who do not intend to give up.Use synonyms
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