The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The first table above provides the number of people's reasons for giving up smoking and the amount of cigarettes they smoke each day.
Whereas
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, the second table illustrates their plan to quit.
Overall
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, those who smoke are most likely to quit smoking motivated by generally better health. The percentages are declining with the increased amounts of cigarettes smoked per day.
Furthermore
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, people who intend to quit smoking within the next month remain the lowest number.
To begin
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with, individuals smoking more than 20 cigarettes per day are those with the lowest percentages. Most of them intend to quit smoking
due to
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their health in general at 64 per
cent
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, financial considerations at 31 per
cent
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, and concerns about less risk of diseases related to smoking at 27 per
cent
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.
However
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, smokers are unlikely to stop smoking
due to
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present health problems. The same goes for family pressure which holds the second lowest amount at 16 per
cent
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. In terms of their timeframe, their possibility of giving up smoking within the next month is very low at 12 per
cent
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. Most of them chose to quit within the next 6 months, making it the highest number at 35 per
cent
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.
Nevertheless
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, there is a 29 per
cent
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of people who do not intend to give up.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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