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Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Transport Preferences Among Young People The bar chart below shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart displays the
transport
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 preferences of young people like
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Car
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Cars
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,
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Motorcycle
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Motorcycles
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, and
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Bicycle
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Bicycles
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 in The
UK
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 , USA ,
France
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 , and Italy in one year .
overall
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The
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Italy had increased
beacuase
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because
use
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transport
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of transport
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 than all countries ,
while
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UK
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 and The United
State
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 had
ramain
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the
 second
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to
use
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transport
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 in all nations . The
france
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 had lowest
to
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use
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transport
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 in all countries . The Italy
was
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there was
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 a significant increase
to
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in using
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use
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 a
car
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 73 than other
transport
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 ,
while
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to
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in using
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use
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another
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other
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transport
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 like
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motorcycle
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a motorcycle
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 and
bicycle
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were
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there were
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 a steep
decrase
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decrease
about
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 9 and 11 .
The
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France
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france
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 used
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bicycle
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bicycles
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 more than any other
transport
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 about 45 .
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Motorcycle
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Motorcycles
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 and
Car
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 were a decline in the
transport
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 of the
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france
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. The United Kingdom
was
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 a steady rise
to
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use
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 a
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car
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cars
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 about 60 than other
transport
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 ,
another side
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UK
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the UK
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was
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had
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 a significant
decrase
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decrease
to
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in to
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use
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motorcylce
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 and bicylce . The USA was
a
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stablewith
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stable with
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UK
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the UK
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to
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use
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 a
car
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 . America was
secondly
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use
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motorcycle
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motorcycles
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 more than all nations ,but it was a lower to
use
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bicycle
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bicycles
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words transport, car, motorcycle, bicycle, uk, france, use with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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