The pie charts provide information about the amount of household expenditure in
Japan
and Malaysia during Use synonyms
a
period of 2010.
Correct article usage
the
overall
, Linking Words
Japan
Use synonyms
was
a significant rise Verb problem
saw
of
other goods and services around Change preposition
in
of
less than a third , Change preposition
apply
whereas
Malaysia Linking Words
was
a sharp increase Verb problem
saw
of
housing Change preposition
in
a
nearly Correct article usage
apply
of
more than a third Change preposition
apply
.
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Similarly
similarly
, the two nations Linking Words
were
a steep decline Verb problem
saw
of
health care roughly Change preposition
in
of
one in twenty .
In detail , Change preposition
apply
Japan
used the main of other goods and services a made up of 29% , Use synonyms
in addition
food used Linking Words
secondly
rise around a quarter of Linking Words
household
. in Fix the agreement mistake
households
the
fact , Correct article usage
apply
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japan
apply of housing and transport Change noun form
japan's
were
a steady gradually of a fifth . in spite Change the verb form
was
of
, Correct pronoun usage
of this
japan
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employed
a sudden plummet Verb problem
experienced
of
health care Change preposition
in
approximately
6% .
Afterwards, MalaysiaChange preposition
by approximately
was using
a significant rise in housing around more than a third , Wrong verb form
saw
while
applying Linking Words
of
food and other goods and services Change preposition
apply
therefore
a fifth . And Linking Words
then
exploit transport Linking Words
was
Verb problem
had
steady
fall of one in ten , Correct article usage
a steady
whereas
health care in term of dropping one in twenty .Linking Words
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