The charts below show the amount spent on consumer goods

The charts below show the amount spent on consumer goods
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the amount spent on consumer goods
The bar chart compares 4 different
countries
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in terms of their customer consumption
on
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6 different types of goods. It is clear from the graph that German people spend the least
amount
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of money on these 6 consumer goods,
whereas
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British people invest the most
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the listed products. Among the six goods, personal stereos and tennis racquets are the two that have been invested the least by
consumers
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in all
countries
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. None of the consumer groups in any
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countries
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country
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spend more than 160000
pounds
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on them. British
consumers
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purchase perfumes far more than those in other
countries
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, investing just over 160000
pounds
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on them each year. Germans and Italians spend a similar
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of money
for
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CDs, at around 150 thousand
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, they
also
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invest the same
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, about 159000
pounds
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, for toys. Photographic film sees the greatest
amount
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of consumption. Both France and British
consumers
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spend more than 160000
pounds
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on films, and the respective figure of Italians is approximately 158000
pounds
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.
Consumers
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from
German
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,
however
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, spent the most on Tennis parquet. They spend about 20000
pounds
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more on Tennis parquet than on photographic films.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, amount, consumers, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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