Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

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travellers more than

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people. Which can be attributed to several

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and express my opinion. On the one hand, most citizens believe that they already have the galleries and historic sites,

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, no need for be rush to visit them at the same time as visitors, It

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could be said that to avoid the crowds,

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, for sure they visited many times before, so, if they planning to see it again it could be for exploring new things there.

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who visit these places, are aware that the main goal of the

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is to see these famous places related to the country’s history, and they are planning for that before.

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, it will be expensive for local people if they enter it frequently. In conclusion, there

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no easy to answer

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question. On balance, I tend to believe that the price of tickets must be less for residents to encourage them more, people can

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be encouraged to visit if the places offer new, affordable, and fun experiences. By doing

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, museums and historical sites can serve both tourists and locals

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The intention to provide a balanced view, considering reasons for both local and tourist perspectives, is good and helps give a comprehensive view of the topic.

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You have a clear introduction and a strong conclusion that wraps up your points effectively.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cultural heritage
tourist attractions
interactive exhibits
perception
civic pride
engagement
community outreach
curate
cultural institutions
historical significance
sustainable tourism
resident benefits
local patronage
preserve
educational initiatives

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Fully explain your ideas

In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in large cities where they only know a few people in their area. What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a mall community?

in many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative development

As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to Job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of Job satisfaction for all workers?

The proportion of older people is increasing, what problems will this cause and what solutions can be suggested?