Practice: You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom or Dad, I hope

this

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letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health and I hope you are doing well in your life.I am writing

this

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letter to invite you

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gruduation

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graduation

ceremony. To commence with,after doing a lot of

hardwork

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hard work

and

giving

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making

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sacrifices,

finally

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,a time came

where

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when

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can

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could

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celebrate my happiness with you.

While

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,in recent four years,you

help

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have helped

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me a lot in terms of finance ,

emotions

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and emotions

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hard

break

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,it really means a lot

for

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me .My University allows me to invite any 4 members,it can be friends,relatives and my

parensts

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parents

.I am inviting you my mom and dad

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my little sister,

Morover

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Moreover

,for

you

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your

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information,I am inviting Jack who is

friend

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a friend

the friend

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of mine and

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apply

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is deeply connected with me,

additionally

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also

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my sorrows and happiness with him,

hence

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, I believe he is

ilke

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real brother for me. The venaue will be held at F-8 Islambad ,on 28 Oct 2025 on 3 pm.Please arrive before the time which I mention and

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bring some new clothes for me. Kind Regards, Saqib Khan.

notkhan01Tue Jan 14 2025

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Coherence & Cohesion

Try to ensure clear sentence structure and check for grammatical errors to improve clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

Make sure each paragraph contains a single main idea to enhance coherence.

Task Achievement

Review punctuation and use correct capitalization, especially for names and proper nouns.

Task Achievement

Clear expression of excitement about graduation and gratitude towards parents.

Coherence & Cohesion

Warm greeting and closing, making the letter feel personal and affectionate.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

176 words

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