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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in woodchuck county at different time of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in woodchuck county at different time of the year.
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The table provides key information about the types
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species
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 of
birds
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 watched
for
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many times in Woodchuck country.
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, it is clear from the table that most
species
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 of
birds
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 were extremely observed in the
summer
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.
In addition
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, Juncos
birds
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 did not
wache
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wake
 in the
summer
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 but it was there in the winter,
while
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 some
species
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 of
birds
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 are
observent
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observed
observant
 in the
summer
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 only like Mockingbirds. All of these
birds
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located
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are located
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 in Woodchuck
county
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according to
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 what is shown. The different
species
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 of
birds
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 observed in
bothe
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both
season
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seasons
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 Sumer and winter
seasone
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season
seasons
like
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are like
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 Cardinals, Crows and Woodpeckers. One
species
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 of
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birds
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bird
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 watched in the winter only
such
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 as Juncos. In terms of, which types of
birds
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found
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are found
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 in the
summer
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seasone
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season
 only that need to give some detail about it.
These
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There
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species
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was
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were
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 more than three types of
birds
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like
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Bluebirds, Mockingbirds, and Orielesvas wall as Vireas

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words species, birds, summer with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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