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The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide
emissions
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 per person in four
european
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European
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 countries,
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United
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the United
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 Kingdom,
Sweeden
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Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal, over the period from 1967 to 2007.
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, between 1967 and 2007,
United
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the United
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 Kingdom was the country with
most
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the most
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emissions
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 per person, but, in the same period, it had a decreasing trend. In those periods, Portugal and Sweden had an
increase
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 in their
emissions
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. By 1967, Portugal was the country with the lowest
emissions
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 with less than 2
tonnes
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 of emission. By 2007, Portugal had an
increase
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 in their
emissions
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 with almost 6
tonnes
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. Italy had 4
tonnes
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 of
emissions
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 by 1967, but it started to
increase
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 in their
emissions
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. By 1987, Italy and Sweden had the same value, with over 6
tonnes
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 of
emissions
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 per person. From 1967 and 1977, Sweden had an
increase
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 and reached its peak with over 10
tonnes
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 of
emissions
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. But, after 1977, it had a sharp decrease, reaching less than 6
tonnes
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 in 2007, the same value as Portugal.
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