The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides information about the recorded crimes in Manchester city centre and the changes between the years 2003 to 2012.

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burglary is the highest committed crime,

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it dropped significantly and was surpassed by cases of car theft in the middle of the study. Meanwhile, robbery is the lowest and remained constant throughout the years. In the year 2003, burglary is the highest crime rate in the city of Manchester with above 3000 and

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to rise in the next year reaching a peak of approximately 3800.

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, the figure fell drastically reaching the lowest point of just above 1000 in 2008. The number slightly recovered in the following years until 2012 with roughly 1500.

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car theft at the beginning is the second highest case with an estimated 2300, albeit after 2006 it became the most commonly committed crime by the people in Manchester and steadily rose ending just below 2300.

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, the robbery case in the city shows mild changes in 9

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period with just under 1000, which is the lowest.