The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given lines provide particular information about three various fields of crime were happened in Newport city centre from 2003 to 2012. The units are measured by number of incidents.

Overall

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, the chart shows us that the general trend is decreasing for

burglary

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, but it is stable for car

theft

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and robbery. The indicators of

burglary

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started at approximately 3500 in 2003, but it had been decreasing since 2004 and it went down to 2500.

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, the numbers of car

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theft

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thefts

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and

robbery

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robberies

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did not really change at all. First of all, in 2003, the

burglary

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was most committed in Newport city. The next year it reached its peak and it was around 3800. Since

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had

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not increased till 2012.

In addition

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, the happened

burglary

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hit a low of 1200 in 2008, the lowest in these nine years. In comparison with

burglary

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, In 2003, the

theft

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from individuals was

least

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the least

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taken part in the city and it was around 600. These numbers did not change through the years. The car

theft

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began at 2600, and

then

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it ended with 2400 people.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words burglary, theft with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

184 words

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The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Describe one or two leadership, community and/or learning & development activities that you have engaged in.

Some claim that children are more aware of environmental issues than older adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With traffic jams and pollution increasing every year in big cities, some people say that public transport should be free in big cities to help reduce these problems which are caused by cars.To what extent do you agree or disagree?