The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the difference between three types of crime in
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UK’s downtown over the period 2003-2012.
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In 2003, the rate of burglary was at nearly 3500 incidents before dropping dramatically to 1100. The number was the highest until 2006. After that, the Correct subject-verb agreement
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remained stable at around 1500 by the end of the period.
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had risen again to around 2700 incidents in 2012, which was higher than the number of burglaries at the same time. Robbery showed a slightly similar pattern, Use synonyms
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