The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
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The line chart displays the quantities of products transported in the UK between the years 1974 and 2002 by roads, water, rail and pipelines.
Overall
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, the amounts of products transported by road, on boats and through pipelines increased over the period of time
while
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the goods that are transported by rail remained relatively stable throughout the time. the transportation in UK by
roads
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began the period at nearly half
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million
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tonnes
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in 1975 and
remaind
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remained
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the same until 1980 which began to slightly decrease in nearly 1883 before it rose gradually year on year until it reached approximately 97
million
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tonnes
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in 2000 which started and ended as the highest method of transportation among all four methods. Water started the time at 40
million
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tonnes
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in 1975 and grew slightly to nearly 60
million
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tonnes
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in 2000 as the second highest way of transportation. Goods transported by rail started at 40
million
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tonnes
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in 1975 the same as water, but it fluctuated throughout the period and remained stable at 40
million
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tonnes
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in 2000. The lowest method
in
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transporting products was the
pipelines
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pipeline
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which started at approximately 5
million
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tonnes
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and went up to just 20% in 2000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Transported goods
  • Quantities
  • Trends
  • Modes of transport
  • Rail
  • Road
  • Water
  • Pipeline
  • Fluctuations
  • Predominance
  • Economic influences
  • Societal changes
  • Technological advancements
  • Environmental impact
  • Growth
  • Steady increase/decrease
  • Comparison
  • Period (e.g., decade, years)
  • Examination
  • Implications
  • Analysis
  • Conclusion
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