Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Nowadays, people are getting used to the commercial advertisement either through online or offline sources. But not everyone who is pleased with
this
kind of method can bring the consumers to buy the products because some of them thought it was already outdated. Personal reviews from other buyers are Linking Words
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one of the reasons that can influence the market. I think advertising still has an impact in getting consumers’ attention as if it can manage creatively following the trends.
Advertising is a marketing technique to introduce items to the targeted audiences. Through the advertisement, sellers can promote all of the benefits, prices or the reasons why public should buy the products. The advertisement can be visualized in soft media Linking Words
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as video on YouTube or shown through television or can be printed out as a poster or flyer. It will be beneficial if the sellers can do both methods so it will gather more attention from the audience. Linking Words
For example
, language services centre Linking Words
such
as Cilacs UII can promote their programs not only through flyers but Linking Words
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by maximising the function of social media Linking Words
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as Instagram ads tools to boost their promotion because many young people are familiar with social media nowadays.
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On the other hand
, the power of mouth-to-mouth or honest reviews from other audiences can influence consumers because it feels more personal and makes the potential buyers trust the products are worth buying. Linking Words
For example
, if getting a smartwatch is the first experience for you Linking Words
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you need to read all of the reviews from the previous buyers so you will trust the brand and be ready to buy it.
In conclusion, I personally agree that advertising still has an impact on the success of persuading customers because there will be more information that we can get from the company or sellers. Even though it should be packaged in creative ways so people will trust the items.Linking Words
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Ensure the essay logically progresses from one idea to the next. Try to use more linking expressions and transition words to emphasize connections between sentences and paragraphs.
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While the response provides examples and relevant points, further elaboration can enhance clarity and showcase deeper understanding. Aim to thoroughly explore the implications of each point.
coherence cohesion
Continue to organize ideas coherently, but pay attention to supporting main points with more in-depth analysis or evidence.
task achievement
The essay successfully discusses both perspectives regarding advertising and provides a personal opinion in the conclusion section.
coherence cohesion
The essay maintains a clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
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There are specific examples used, such as 'language services centre such as Cilacs UII', which add realism and grounding to the argument.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite