the graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centers in Melbourne,Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparision where relevant.
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The line graph shows data about the number of people
how
took part in various activities at one particular social centre in Correct word choice
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Melborne
, Australia in Correct your spelling
Melbourne
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a 20_year
20_year
period between 2000 and 2020.
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20-year
Overall
, what can be seen is that Linking Words
film
club was by far the busiest Correct article usage
the film
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. And table tennis was the second Correct your spelling
area
papular
in the Correct your spelling
popular
last
year.
As for the film club, it started with almost 65% in 2000, did not change during Linking Words
this
20-year period Linking Words
mantioned
and ended at the same point, in 2020.
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the
Martial arts, there was a slight fluctuation Correct article usage
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around
35%, between 2000
and 2020.
If we look at the details for the Amateur dramatics, between 2000 and 2005, it remained steady at around 26%. At Change preposition
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this
point, it began to fall steeply each year Linking Words
untill
it finished at just under 10%, in the Correct your spelling
until
last
year.
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By contrast
, the figures for the Musical performances witnessed a gradual increase after the first 5-year period. After Linking Words
which
, it reached almost 20% of the attendees.
Looking at the Table tennis figures, it was approximately 18%, it did not show a significant change until 2010. Correct pronoun usage
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