The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram presents information about how a fuel is made which is called ethanol.

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, the process is man-made

contains

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and contains

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seven stages, starting from growing plants and trees and

ends

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ending

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up with

production

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the production

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of the fuel. At

first,

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sunlight and carbon dioxide help plants and trees to grow after that people will start harvesting the ground

then

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they collect the natural resources to a machine

which

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apply

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called

pre-processing

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the pre-processing

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stage,

this

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machine will produce a material called cellulose Cellulose will taken to that lap to processing it and ends up with sugars,

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this

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sugars will

be add

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be added

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them

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the

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microbes and after

that

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that,

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finally

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produce ethanol fuel which can be used to run cars,

airplanes

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aeroplanes

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, and trucks.

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The diagram below shows how a biofuel called ethanol is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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