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The charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of students at an adult education centre taking various courses offered in 1985 and this year.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs above present the data for courses taken and the
number
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 of students in 1985 and in the present day.
Overall
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, the first graph shows that most students in 1985 chose to study modern languages
such
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 as French, German, and Spanish.
However
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, in the present, the highest
number
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 goes to those who took IT courses.
To begin
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 with, in 1985, students were most likely to take modern languages and fitness and dance courses. Making it the two highest percentage at 24 per
cent
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 and 22 per
cent
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. Some of them took an interest in art at 17 per
cent
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. Followed by local history and cookery with a similar
number
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 at 15 per
cent
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 and 14 per
cent
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.
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, music appreciation is the least course taken. In the present day, IT holds the highest
number
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 of 27 per
cent
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.
Whereas
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, the interest in modern languages has decreased to 17 per
cent
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, making it third in place. On the bright side, the percentage of fitness and dance remains the same at 22 per
cent
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. Cookery is growing to 19 per
cent
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.
Nevertheless
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, art now tuned into the lowest
number
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 at 15 per
cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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