The map show the village of Stokeford and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram above illustrates the improvement of a village called Stokeford in an eighty-year interval from 1930 to 2010, which shows a
noticable
reconstruction.
Starting with the northeast and southwest of the map, Farmland has been replaced with houses, and shopes along the street and across the River Stoke and more streets constructed for residential benefits Correct your spelling
noticeable
while
maintaining the bridge on the north of the map.Linking Words
However
, the post office is in the same place and extending the primary school about two blocks away for educational purposes. Linking Words
In addition
, Gardens have been narrowed and replicated with a large retirement home.
In conclusion, the village shows remarkable changes through these years and clarifies that they work on developing multiple resources.Linking Words
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