The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarize the formation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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about

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the lifting variety of mines in British for almost twenty

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1981 to 2000.

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began in 1981 with almost 100 in 1981, twice steadily and rosed up trends

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area 1984 to 1987, and

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to 1992 for stagnant and the opposite in 1981

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until dropped down to 40

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years, units with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

production levels
fuel types
trend
fluctuating
dominant
period
rise
decline
context
spikes
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