The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010
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The table compares the production of
milk
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annually between 4 countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the Netherlands produced the biggest
amount
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of
milk
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,
whereas
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Guatemala
made
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the lowest figure. As the table shows, in 1990 the Netherlands produced 11,262,000 litres of
milk
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,
while
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in 2000 production decreased to 11,155,000. The largest number of productions was in 2010 with 11,466,000
litters
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. The next country was Australia. The biggest
amount
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of
milk
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was produced in 1990 and the smallest one in 2010, 11,246,000 and 9,165,000
litters
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, respectively. In 2000 Australia produced 11,105,000 litres of
milk
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. The next country was
Tanzania
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. In 1990
Tanzania
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made 87.000
litters
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of
milk
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,
whereas
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in 2000 the
amount
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increased to 1,42,000
litters
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. In 2010
Tanzania
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manufactured 1,55,000
litters
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of
milk
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.
Finally
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, the
last
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country was Guatemala, which had the lowest index. In 2000 the
amount
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was 55.000
litters
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,
while
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in 1990 the
milk
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manufactures was 26.000
litters
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. The largest
amount
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of production was 84.000 in 2010 in
Tanzania
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, amount, litters, tanzania with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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