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The table chart below shows the number of nights spent by domestic and international tourists in Germany from 2016 to 2022 (in millions). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table chart below shows the number of nights spent by domestic and international tourists in Germany from 2016 to 2022 (in millions). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table graph illustrates the expenditures of the night by local and global
tourists
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 in Germany between 2016 and 2022 in millions.
Overall
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, it can be seen from the table that the lowest amount of spending was in the year 2020 for
both
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 domestic and international
tourists
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,
whereas
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 in the year 2019, the expenditures were the highest for
both
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 internal and global
tourists
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.
To begin
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 with,
according to
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 the local
tourists
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 whole years witnessed an increase in the amount of spending
money
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 stood at 366.4
million
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 in 2016 to 382.62
million
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 in 2022.
Similarly
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, global
tourists
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 saw a slight rise in spending
money
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 standing at 80.8
million
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 in 2016 and ending with 68.09
million
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 in 2022. It is most interesting that
both
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 local and global
tourists
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 spent less
money
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 in 2020, around 270.3
million
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 and 32
million
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, respectively.
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,
both
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 of them had the same amount of
money
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 in
both
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 year 2020 around 405.5
million
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 external
tourists
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 and 89.9
million
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 internal
tourists
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.
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