The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.

The bar chart below describes some changes about the percentage of people were born in Australia and who were born outside Australia living in urban, rural and town between 1995 and 2010.
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The bar chart displays some
different
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differences
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around
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in
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popular
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popularity
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of people
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who were
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were
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grow
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growing up
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in Australia and outside Australia
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were
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living in places between a period in 1995 to 2010.
overall
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, the proportion of cities was a significant increase from all
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographics
  • urbanization
  • migration patterns
  • population distribution
  • percentage points
  • growth rate
  • decline
  • trend analysis
  • socioeconomic factors
  • infrastructure development
  • rural exodus
  • census data
  • lifestyle changes
  • residential patterns
  • immigration policies
  • emigration
  • natural increase
  • birth rate
  • settlement patterns
  • push and pull factors
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