some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others , however believe school is the place to learn this. discuss both views and give your own pinion?

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the effectiveness of

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or

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in helping young ones to become

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of

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society

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. Some people believe that

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play a fundamental role

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the development of children

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others think that

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can be possible only if children are being taught by

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at school. In my opinion, both

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are responsible for the

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of young adults. Supporters of guardians believe that the exposure of becoming good

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of

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requires

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which

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don't have because of the academic pressure.

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lay the foundation for children, whatever their

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teach them in their early childhood, they would like to garb those

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in their future, and they will

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behave

the same way their

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are behaving with others. Good

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of

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recquires

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require

the

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of responsibility, respecting the elders, punctuality, and helping others, these

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can be learnt at home because of the extra

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they demand which is not possible at school

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the high demands of

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academics.

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, proponents of

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believe that schools can provide

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environment which is effective in learning to become good

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of

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. In schools, students get

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different community people, they learn the

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of cooperation and importance of relationships under the supervision of

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who

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teach

them effectively.

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are more experienced

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tolerate

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of students with different mindsets,

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play a fundamental role not only in their academics but

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in their social life. In my opinion, both

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and

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can help students to acquire the knowledge of becoming good

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of

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where

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can teach the

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of punctuality,

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-management and doing volunteer work at the same

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teachers

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can provide them academic

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knowledge

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very important to become good

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parents

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and

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teachers

both have their different perspectives and experiences to

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teach

the

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of becoming good

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of

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because

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lay the foundation of those

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which are required to become at the same

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teachers

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implement them.