The map bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)

The map bellow show changes experienced by the town of Lakeside at the beginning of the 21st century. Summarise the information by reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. (Chi Vu)
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The map compares the transformation of the
town
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of Lakeside over a 9-year period from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
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, there are several changes in Lakeside City, including the deconstruction of the university, the repurposement of the art centre and the consolidation of an industrial complex. Beginning with the northern part of the maps,
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the residential area remains untouched in the northern section, both derelict warehouses and the art centre transformed into a car park and a Multi-screen cinema, respectively. Interestingly, there was a repurposement of the old
town
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to be the offices, its area was cut down in half to construct a new university.
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, the lake was changed into a pond in the northeast of the
town
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. In terms of the western section of the metropolis, the residential field was repurposed into a shopping centre in the southwest of
town
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.
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, the other residential area was consolidated with an industrial complex, forming a huge chunk of construction.
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