The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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the proportion of published films and the number of sold tickets in the year 1996 and 2006.

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, drama

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as the highest genre of film released in both 1996 and 2006,

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romance remain steady at approximately 5%. In the meantime, the highest cinema ticket sales

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comedy in both years,

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fantasy and romance

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the lowest. On the one hand, drama recorded the highest percentage of

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published in 1996 and 2006 at 25% and 35%, respectively. Followed by comedy, fantasy, and romance

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, the drama genre ranked below comedy in both years, with 5-7% differences in those two years of observation. It shows that there is an inverse comparison between

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released and sold tickets.

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