The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pie charts compare the
population
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in categories of marital status of Canadians and Australians. Numbers are given in per cents.
Overall
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, most people in
Australia
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and Canada either are or have been married.
Although
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the percentage of separated Canadians is higher, the level of divorce in both countries is low,
as well as
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those who have never been in marriage. The number of married people is 29% in Canada
while
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in
Australia
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almost half of the
population
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is married (46%).
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53% of Canadians are registered as separated, only 41% of Australians have the same status. 3% of Canadian citizens have a heterosexual partner, meanwhile,
this
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type of marriage has not been registered in
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. At the same time, 7% of the Canadian
population
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claimed to be without relationships in comparison to 5% in
Australia
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. The number of widowed is practically the same in
Australia
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and in Canada (6% and 7% respectively). The category of divorced has the lowest numbers among Canadian (1%)
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Australian (2%)
population
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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