The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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the change

of

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3 types

households

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of households

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with electrical

applicances

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appliances

and time of housework in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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the first graph, the percentage of 3 types

households

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of households

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: washing

machine

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machines

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,

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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,

Vacuum

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cleaner

are

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growing up from 1920 to 2019.And the washing machine data change biggest.In 1920, the percentage of

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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only

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about 2%, but in 2019, it's 100%. From the data, washing machine raise

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.The

number

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grow

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up from 1920 to 1960, but

in

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1960 to 1980,it

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dropped.

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1980 to 2019, the data

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increased

secound

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time, and in 2019 the

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about 62%. On the other

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, the

number

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of

hours

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of housework per week

are

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decreased. In 1920, people

need

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use 50

hours

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in

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per household per week.

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, in 2019, the

number

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grow down

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to 10

hours

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. Between 1920 and 1960, the

number

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change

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is

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very quickly, it's

decrased

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decreased

30

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from 30

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hours

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for

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a

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week to 20

hours

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. At the same time, the percentage of electrical

applicances

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appliances

on

refrigerator

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refrigerators

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and vacuum

cleaner

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cleaners

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are

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increased steeply to 100%.