The pie charts below show the share of the different brands in 2009 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the share of the different brands in 2009 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The charts illustrate the shares of the various brands during 2009 and 2019.
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, there were shifts in the popularity of all products between 2009 and 2019.
However
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, the most noticeable change was the decline in the
share
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of conventional
TVs
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. At the same time,
tablets
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saw an upward
share
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. Looking at the details, in 2009, conventional
TVs
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emerged as the most popular technology product at 34%, followed closely by laptops, ranking at 20%, and desktops at 18%, where they were not nearly as popular as traditional
TVs
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. Mobile phone sales were at 15%,
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flat-screen
TVs
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and
tablets
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ranked in the smallest shares among the devices at 8% and 5%, respectively. By 2019, conventional TV sales had significantly decreased to 4%, which means people were not interested in
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kind of television anymore.
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, modern TV sales
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became the highest
share
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at 27%.
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percentage was almost the same as mobile phones at 26%. The revenue of
tablets
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experienced a 14% rise compared to 2009, when
tablets
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had a small
share
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of 5%, by 2019, their
share
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rose dramatically to 19%, reflecting a growing trend in mobile and portable devices. The demand for desktop computers and laptops had declined, showing a decrease, reaching 12% for both.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words share, tvs, tablets with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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