The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The line graph shows thefts per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the comparison of car theft between four countries,
such
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as Canada and France over a 9-year period from 1990 to 1999.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
amount
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of cars that were stolen in
UK
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the UK
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experienced a downward trend,
while
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in
Sweden
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the total of vehicle thefts encountered an upward trend.
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, others confronted a fluctuating trend. Regarding the trends, in 1975, stolen vehicles in the UK were in the major
amount
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with about 18
thousand
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. followed by
Sweden
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, France and Canada at almost 9,8 and 6, respectively. It is important to note that the
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amount
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of car thefts in Great Britain remained highest with an increased number from 18 to 20
thousand
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in the next two years
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,
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Sweden
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's stolen cars outraced France's by 2
thousand
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different. From 1991 onwards, the
amount
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of UK's stolen vehicles remained highest despite a slight fall in 1993 and peaked in 1996 at 21
thousand
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.
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, in
Sweden
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stolen cars increased and reached the top in 1999 with 14
thousand
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. Interestingly, the
amount
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of car theft in
Sweden
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and Canada was identical
at the end
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of the period with 7
thousand
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, sweden, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • theft rate
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • vehicle theft
  • per thousand vehicles
  • decade
  • steady increase
  • steep decline
  • comparative analysis
  • noteworthy changes
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