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The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows waste collection by recycling centre from 2011 to 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the figures for
waste
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 collection in four categories at a recycling
center
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 between 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that
waste
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 collected for all areas increased,
in particular
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 for paper
waste
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 which was generally highest throughout the period.
In contrast
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, garden and tin
waste
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 were less commonly recycled. There was a consistent decrease
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 the amount of paper
waste
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 (from 57
tons
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 to 40
tons
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) from 2011 to 2013,
however
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, the data increased dramatically for the rest of the period and ended at 70
tons
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.
Similarly
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, in 2011, the figure for glass
waste
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 was 48
tons
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 and witnessed a negligible decrease (reaching 41
tons
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) in 2012. The figure
then
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 recovered to its initial number, overtaking the statistic for paper
waste
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 in 2013, and fluctuated around 50
tons
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 for the rest of the time surveyed. The number
for
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 tin
waste
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 was erratic around 35
tons
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 for the
5-year-period
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5-year period
 and reached 39
tons
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 in 2015. Garden
waste
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 was slightly lower, dropping from 32
tons
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 to 15
tons
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 in 2012, before rebounding to 31
tons
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 the next year and finishing at 35
tons
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Waste collection
  • Recycling centre
  • Rise
  • Fall
  • Amount/Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Anomaly
  • Pattern
  • Data
  • Significant
  • Notable change
  • Regulations
  • Public awareness
  • Local policies
  • Prediction
  • Future trends
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