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The chart shows the information relating to people within 15 minute drive service in a particular region in the UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

The chart shows the information relating to people within 15 minute drive service in a particular region in the UK. It also compares the people living in urban areas and people living in rural areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.
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The bar graph describes the data about society within
15 minute
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 car ride service in a certain area in the UK.
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 it differentiates the people living in the city and people living in the countryside.
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, all supports are available by 100% for the community in the city. But there are some exceptions in the suburban places and these are
post
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office
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 and primary
school
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.
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 with the town, all of the humans can get what services they want. The citizens can
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access
 the doctor,
post
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office
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, primary
school
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 and secondary
school
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 whenever they need,
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 100% in 15 minutes.
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, in the rural areas, the villagers can
acces
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access
 the doctor and the secondary
school
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 for 100%.
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However
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 there are
diffuculties
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difficulties
 getting
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to the
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post
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office
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 and the primary
school
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 in 15 minutes. Around 90% of individuals reach the
post
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office
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 and approximately 60% of society can get the primary
school
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.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words post, office, school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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