The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process shown in the diagram displays the production stages of
electricity
from coal.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the production of Linking Words
electricity
is an eight-stage, man-made and linear process that begins with extracting coal as a raw material and ends with using it as a Use synonyms
gas
for Use synonyms
electricity
usage by different places.
First of all, the coal is extracted from a mine as big pieces and it is crushed into small pieces using a crusher machine. Use synonyms
Then
, the crushed coal is carried by a truck to the gasifier where it is heated by temperature and turned to Linking Words
gas
before it is being cooled down in a cooling place where the waste heat operated in cooling machines.
After that , the cool Use synonyms
gas
was cleaned in a cleaning place and transferred to a Use synonyms
gas
power plant where the Use synonyms
gas
went through another heat waste procedure. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
gas
produces Use synonyms
electricity
that can be used by people in houses or by big factoriesUse synonyms
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