Some people think that the governments should increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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environmental

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and the government wants to increase the cost of

fuels

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fuel

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to solve

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am disagree

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with

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essay why.

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, increasing the price of fuel ultimately can not solve pollution

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. I believe that cars are fundamental to use

everyday

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and are essential to our lives.

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, if we have to take the bus every day to go to work, we would spend a lot of money so

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people prefer to use the car.

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, I think the government should look for other alternatives to solve environmental

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, it could improve imports,

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oil,

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people more jobs and

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us pay a

not so high

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tax ourselves. In conclusion, Increasing

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fuel would not be the solution to the

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and would generate another problem for the country if people do not buy cars. I guess we should find another alternative way to solve environmental

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