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37. The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars

37. The graph below shows the sales of children's books, adult fiction and educational books between 2002 and 2006 in one country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 60 50 40 30 20 10 0 Children's books Adult fiction Educational books The sales of three different kinds of books between 2002 and 2006 2002 2003 2004 2005 2006 Million dollars
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The given line graph compares the
sales
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 of three different types of
books
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 from 2002 to 2006. It is evident that the
sale
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 of educational
books
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 and
children’s
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books
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 showed an upward trend, but
adult
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fiction
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 lost popularity over the given time period. In 2002,
adult
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fiction
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 was on top with a
sale
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 of 45
million
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dollars
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, followed by
children’s
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books
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 at 33
million
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dollars
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 and educational
books
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 at 25
million
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dollars
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. After a few fluctuations, the
sale
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 of
adult
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fiction
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 declined to 30
million
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dollars
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 by 2006.
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, educational
books
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 were the least sold in 2002. After
that
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 their
sale
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 showed an opposing trend to that of
adult
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fiction
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 and reached $32
million
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 by 2006.
Sales
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 of
Children’s
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books’
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books
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 started at $32
million
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 in 2002, but rose rapidly to 42
million
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dollars
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 in 2003. From 2003 to 2005 there was a very slight increase in
sales
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, but after 2005,
sales
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 grew considerably and reached an
all time
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 high of $56
million
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.
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,
children’s
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books
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 ruled the market after 2003, among the given three categories of
books
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, books, sale, children’s, adult, fiction, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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