The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. AL

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four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009. There are 4 types of

schools

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. Interesting point

that

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community school was the most

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at the end

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. The proportion of people in specialist

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started at 12 per cent in 2000

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and

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increased twice to 11 and 10

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in 2009.

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schools

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began at 24 per cent in 2000

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that it

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for the next two years

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12 per cent. In

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2000 Voluntary controlled

schools

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hit the peak percentage at 52% of

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.

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, if we look at Community

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, it started a the lowest percentage of 12% pupils in the first year.

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point, the proportion increased significantly to 58%