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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Z

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Z
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The table illustrates the number of students who attend four types of secondary
schools
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 between 2000 - 2009.
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, as we can see there are four types of secondary education colleges where students can study there,
such
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 as specialist,grammar,voluntary-controlled and community
schools
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. So, there are three classifications of
schools
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such
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 as
,
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 specialist,grammar and voluntary programs
that
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which
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 were the lowest
one
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among the community colleges. One of them, specialist
schools
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 in 2000 were 12% and it decreased slightly to 10% in 2009, and the second one is grammar with 24% in the beginning, and
the
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 end it dropped significantly to 12%.
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, voluntary-controlled colleges were the most attended place in 2000 with 52%, but, in 2009 it went down dramatically to 20%.
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, only community
schools
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 were able to increase their numbers to 58% from 12% only just for the
nine year
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 period, and
then
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this
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 type of school became the highest percentage among the other three types.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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