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he diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

he diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the cyclic process involved in recycling
glass
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bottles
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. It comprises several stages, beginning with the elimination of used
bottles
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 and ending
up in
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 the distribution of new
glass
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 products to stores.
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, the process is highly structured and involves the transformation of waste
glass
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 into reusable products. It highlights the sustainability of recycling by showing how discarded
bottles
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 are cleaned, melted, and reformed,
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 completing a continuous cycle. In the first stage, used
glass
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bottles
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 are disposed of in designated recycling bins. These are
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 collected and transported to a treatment plant, where the first cleaning work occurs. Here, the
bottles
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 are washed and sterilized to ensure they are free from contaminants. Following the cleaning process, the
bottles
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 are crushed into smaller pieces before being subjected to intense heat in a melting machine. The molten
glass
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 is
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 formed into new
bottles
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, which are filled with goods. These finished
bottles
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 are delivered to supermarkets and ready for reuse, in
this
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 way restarting the period.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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