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The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the number of people taking part in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of
participants
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 taking part in
Badminton
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,
Basketball
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, Tennis, and Rugby in a specific region from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
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, it is evident that the
number
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 of people who participated in Rugby decreased in 2005;
whereas
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, individuals who took part in Tennis increased. Notably, the amount of participation in both
Basketball
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 and
Badminton
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 relatively remained at the same level. In 1985, Rugby was the most popular sport in the region at 250
participants
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;
however
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,
this
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 steadily declined over the period, reaching 150 in 2000, before declining and meeting Bandminton at the same
number
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, which was 50
participants
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, the lowest
number
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 among other sports.
On the contrary
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, Tennis sport began the period with 150
participants
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 and increased gradually to over 200 in 2005, the highest
number
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 among other sports. Both
Basketball
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 and
Badminton
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 sports had the most stable figures. The
number
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 of people who took part in
Basketball
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 was between 50 and 100
participants
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 throughout the period, and for
Badminton
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, the
number
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 of individuals was no more than 50.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, participants, badminton, basketball with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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