The charts below show the chanages in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
This
bar chart depicts the changes in ownership Linking Words
electrical
appliancesChange preposition
of electrical
,
and the amount of generation for the period from 1920 to 2019.It is clear from the graph that the electrical appliance helps the people Remove the comma
apply
for
save and reduce spentChange preposition
to
hour
for house cleaning.
Fix the agreement mistake
hours
According to
what is shown for comparison Linking Words
it
the first one for washing machines the rate of households in 1920 was 40 and increased ratio to level 72 number .and the second appliance refrigerator from zero to a high level in 2019 was 100 per cent and the Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
match in the important one vacuum cleaner starts from 30 Linking Words
fee
to higher levels almost same second motor .
and the hours and save time from 1920 to 2019 start from 50 to 10 .
Change to a plural noun
fees
To sum up
,we could say that with more and develop all the electrical Linking Words
appliance
it other hands for Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
person
to save Add an article
a person
the person
hour
for cleaning.Add an article
an hour
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