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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to s3x and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The bar charts illustrate the percentage of people in Britain who purchase
Pop
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,
Rock
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, and Classical
music
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 albums, categorized by gender and
age
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.
Overall
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,
males
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 consistently spend more on
music
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 albums than
females
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 across all genres. In terms of
age
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, younger
groups
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 dominate
Pop
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 and
Rock
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purchases
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,
while
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 older individuals show a strong preference for Classical
music
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. For
Pop
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music
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,
males
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 account for slightly over 30% of
purchases
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, compared to just under 25% for
females
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. Among
age
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groups
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, 25-34-year-olds are the highest consumers, spending just above 30%.
Similarly
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, the 16-24
age
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 group follows closely, with
purchases
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 slightly below 30%.
In contrast
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, the 45+ group contributes the least, with figures under 10%. A similar pattern is observed in
Rock
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music
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, where
males
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 once again surpass
females
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, with approximately 32% of
purchases
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 compared to 20% for
females
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. The 16-24 and 25-34
age
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groups
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 dominate, both spending around 30-35%.
However
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, interest declines significantly among older
groups
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, with the 45+ category accounting for less than 10%.
In contrast
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, Classical
music
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 exhibits a different trend. The 45+ group represents the highest percentage of buyers, accounting for around 20%,
while
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 the 25-34 and 35-44
groups
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 contribute modestly, at 15% and 10%, respectively.
Purchases
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 among 16-24-year-olds are minimal, at just 1-2%. Gender differences are less pronounced in
this
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 category, with
males
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 slightly exceeding
females
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 by around 3%. In conclusion,
while
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 younger individuals and
males
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 dominate
Pop
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 and
Rock
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music
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purchases
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, Classical
music
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 is most popular among older people, with a relatively balanced gender distribution.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast, while".
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Change the sixth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pop, rock, music, age, males, females, groups, purchases with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph representation
  • categorized
  • predominant
  • disparities
  • similarities
  • age-related preferences
  • noticeable trends
  • age brackets
  • wider appeal
  • demographics
  • speculate
  • resurgence
  • vinyl records
  • digital streaming
  • music genres
  • albums purchases
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