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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the
percentage
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 of purchaser spending on different categories in five different countries in 2002.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the
percentage
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 of
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first
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the first
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section
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 (food, drinks and tobacco) accounted for the largest figure in every country. The
proportion
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 of
third
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the third
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section
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 (leisure and education) was seen
the
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as the
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 lowest share in
five
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the five
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 countries. Looking at the graph in more detail, the
percentage
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 of
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first
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the first
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section
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 in
Turkey
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 was the highest figure at 32.14%,
while
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 the figures for
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first
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 in Italy, Spain and
Turkey
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was
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 shown as lower than 20%.
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, it was noticeable that the figures for
second
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the second
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section
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 (clothing and footwear) in Spain and
Turkey
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 were observed as minimal difference.
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, the
proportion
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 of
second
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the second
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section
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 in Italy was higher than
those
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that
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 in
Turkey
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. Meanwhile, the
proportion
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 of
third
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the third
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section
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 in Spain was the lowest share, standing at 1.98%. In conclusion, there was minimal relation
about
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between
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 each
section
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.
This
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 means that the highest
proportion
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 of
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first
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the first
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section
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 was in
Turkey
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,
and
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apply
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the highest
percentage
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 of
second
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the second
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section
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 was in Italy, and
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lastly
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lastly,
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 that of
third
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the third
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section
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 was in
Turkey
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, first, section, proportion, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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