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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different iters in five different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates information about how much national consumers spend on different items in Ireland, Italy,
Spain
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,
Sweden
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 and
Turkey
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.
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, what stands out from the table is that individuals in all given countries spent their money on food, drinks and tobacco more than other categories.
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 leisure and education were the lowest. Turkish were the most spender on food drink and tobacco
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 leisure and education,
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Sweden
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 was the lowest consumer of these items. Looking at the details, in 2002, people in
Turkey
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 were the most consumers among countries in food drinks and tobacco, ranking at 32.14%.
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 was followed by Ireland at 28.91%. Ranked third place was
Spain
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 at 18.80%. Italy and
Sweden
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 were the lowest consumers at 16.36% and 15.77%. , which their spending levels were nowhere near
Turkey
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. Focusing on clothing and footwear, it had been consumed 9% by Italians of their money on these categories. Ireland,
Spain
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 and
Turkey
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 had almost the same percentage of consumption at 6.43%, 6.51% and 6.63%, respectively.
Sweden
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's citizens did not spend as much money as others, which was the lowest number on the list. Regarding leisure and education,
Turkey
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 had the highest percentage at 4.35%.
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Sweden
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 and Italy had a similarity at 3.20% and 3.22%, respectively.
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 on the list was
Spain
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 at 1.98%

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words spain, sweden, turkey with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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